Unwritten Soul

Return To The Sea - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Secret from the river
Carried by the endless waves
Flowing to return to the sea
And then hide in the ocean depth

As everybody feels happy and pain
So the innocence heart in us, just the same

Return to the sea
Listen the ballad of of waves
A confession in a song from sea
By the chanting bubbles of emotions
With the whispers in the ocean
Humming secret story from the depth
As this heart hide something in breath

Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection

Comments about Return To The Sea by Unwritten Soul

  • Freshman - 780 Points Aranthabailu Ummar (8/14/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    If I touch your first linesecret from the river it is our imagination of silent flow. Because river will flow silently without producing any noise. We can listen its melodious rhythms when there is no external noise or voice from its bank. So the secret of the river is a imagination. From the imagination it may be any thing. It depends on the feeling of the person how he feels it. And it makes some sound when we looks in to 2nd line of your poem.Carried by the endless waves.

    To be continued..... (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 780 Points Aranthabailu Ummar (8/14/2015 6:21:00 AM)

    Hi Soul, Mubarak for the day.
    Again will show a bad dare to write on this poem for the first stanzas of it
    1. Secret from the river
    2. Carried by the endless wave
    3. Flowing to return to the sea
    4. And then hide in the ocean depth.
    From a first look we may think each lines have connecting to one by one
    But if I peep deep in to it is not
    in other cross it may have links (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (3/18/2015 7:27:00 PM)

    ......beautiful imagery and a most lovely poem....reminds me of the epic story the Odyssey....love this one soul....and congratulations on member poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (3/18/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    I checked out your biography and you don't say where you are from, but I think I can safely assume from your sentence structures that English is not your native language. Nevertheless, your poem has some good thoughts and leaves me with a pleasant feeling. Congratulations on having the poem selected as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,012 Points Godfrey Morris (3/18/2015 5:59:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful your pen did justice in writing this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/18/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Very strong and beautiful poem and congratulation my friend US (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,448 Points Lyn Paul (3/18/2015 7:42:00 AM)

    My favourite place. There are so many answers in the sea. Love your soothing words. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (12/16/2014 10:37:00 PM)

    The title of the poem just took me back to my ester years of studenthood. It reminded me of one of the act plays 'The Riders to the Sea' by an Irish writer Synge portrays deep sufferings of a mother who sacrifices her sons one after other to the sea. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (12/16/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    Nice imagery and matured expression of human suffering in rhymes! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,386 Points Clarence Prince (11/2/2014 11:37:00 AM)

    Return To The Sea Great work, Unwriten Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (10/23/2014 12:49:00 AM)

    and life's secret is liken to salt in the sea
    unseen from outside
    but its the essence of the sea itself
    without which,
    life will not survive....

    Excellent write soul...inspiring! a great 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/22/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    Poem on life with poets beauty that he paints - the innocence heart in us.. lovely Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 160 Points Wabi Sabi (10/21/2014 6:32:00 PM)

    I like this poem! Soul! This poem tells the hardest and kindness of life.. It felts forgiving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,112 Points Hans Vr (10/4/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful masterpiece of art, bro.
    So true the sea. the sea is king and every drop of water flows towards it.
    Just because the sea positions itself at the lowest level on earth.
    We can learn so much from from this untouchable vast mass of water.
    Our Creator has made it so vast, so big, but we cannot even drink from it.
    So powerful, so huge so all-receiving, 'cause it puts itself humbly low.
    Humility is strength.
    Wow, your poem provokes so many thoughts in me; I was just letting them flow for awhile.
    Excellent work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,813 Points Ramesh Rai (9/26/2014 8:52:00 AM)

    You can write best which i can't. Simply say it is the best.my earnest request to keep writing n comment for my poem bcoz it means more. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (9/10/2014 12:12:00 PM)

    hidden depths of secrets flown aling the river of lives poured into the lapping waves to and fro ......beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (8/31/2014 1:16:00 PM)

    Lovely poem Soul. The sea must hold many secrets, and is often used as a metaphor for our emotional life. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Maria Goodison (8/29/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    The combining of the words in this poem show a depths you've out done your self well done (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/29/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    Another beautiful image maker of river, waves and sea. All combining together to form
    an eternal peace of heart. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (8/28/2014 11:15:00 PM)

    To see a unique beauty in the depths of the sea it requires a great mind and not just eyes. The cowards live in the main land and the brave ones never swam to the safety of it perhaps. With a unique and capsising theme you have penned down a beautiful poem dear Soul..
    Somewhere, somehow dear Soul, we personally lost a connection and we have been not reading each other for long.....
    Soul, I am reinventing it and do apologise for the same and wish to read your poems and do firmly believe you can never totally ignore me either. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 9, 2014

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