Jeff Gangwer

Rookie - 274 Points (September 23,1984 / Hood River, Oregon)

Returns / Departures

I've noticed,
in travels of my own,
that seemingly,
my returns
are never as long—
and never as arduous—
as my departures—
what we might call
a strange inequality in traveling—
in coming and in going—
and in mine,
I've asked my fellows,
on planes
or on shuttles,
and to my delight,
I've learned
that most of them feel the same way—
that our returns are easier
than our departures

Submitted: Thursday, June 26, 2014

Topic of this poem: traveling

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  • Gold Star - 16,058 Points Mandolyn ... (10/12/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    i'm the opposite
    my departure is way easier
    i'd like to build a trebuchet and put myself in it.

    good poem, gangwer. you've been awol. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Piumi Wijenayake (8/20/2014 9:25:00 AM)

    Congratulation, what a beautiful poem you are right its too hard to depart but it is easier to repent. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,330 Points Sandra Feldman (6/27/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    Yes, you're right, the returns always better! . I suppose that is why the French wish you Bon Voyage but also, Bon Retour, good return
    You're excellent little poem, reminded me of that phrase, Bon Retour that I think is so a propos, very befitting.
    I'm not trying to be a snob by using these French phrases, your nice poem brought them to mind. I lived in France for many years so something besides the baguette, camembert and Bordeaux wine stuck with me.
    In any case enjoyed your lovely, light poem, very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vassilis Comporozos (6/27/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    Very true and really nice. Congrats on this piece! I adored it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,101 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/26/2014 11:56:00 PM)

    good writing, thanks. I like it.
    please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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