Revision Poem by Theresa Ann Moore

Revision



The eraser on a pencil
Is worn severely flat…
Brisk rubbing has attempted
to completely obliterate…
A faint trace is
replaced by bold thoughts
that attempt to hide
errors of exploration

Sheets of blue lined paper
are crumpled and tossed
As the stammering
of hypocrisy mounds
into a heap of dissatisfaction...
The efforts to satisfy
multiply in a struggle
to disguise with clever lies

2/7/2010

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Amy Marie 07 February 2010

I can totally relate.

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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