Rhyme And Rhythm Or Theme And Content* Poem by Subbaraman N V

Rhyme And Rhythm Or Theme And Content*


Sure rhyme and rhythm always great
Music and sound sure a treat!
Poem writing lovely art
Love it is to poet's heart
Grammar and rules play a part!
Theme and content must be smart!
Feelings and emotions sure
Make the poem simply pure!
Content no doubt adds splendor
Message gives it more grandeur!
As I write this with great care
Bhagwat Pada comes to share
"bhaja govindaṃ bhaja govindaṃ
govindaṃ bhaja mūdhamate |
samprāpte sannihite kāle
nahi nahi rakṣati dukriṅkaraṇe"




Sunday, January 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a thought that inspires not to be so sensitive about grammar but be sensitive to theme and content.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 January 2015

Interesting mix in subtly introducing Hindi into the work...Personally, I am not an endorser or supporter of rhmsical poetics, however some poems simply scream out for rhyme...This poem does ~FjR~

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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