Rhythm Of Eternity Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Rhythm Of Eternity

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Listening to that lonesome whistle as the train comes
passing by.

Wintering thoughts come into mind, filling intellect
with their cold and lonely ideas.

Feelings of abandonment building within, totally
scattering emotions as they come into sight, letting
them all fill me with their verve and energy.

A total being filled with the rhythm of eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 March 2015

It's a wonderful poem with a very poetic caption. 'lonesome whistle'? - A great expression. 'cold and lonely ideas' - subtle thoughts... 'A total being filled with the rhythm of eternity.' - A total beauty!

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