John Lyday

Rookie (Chicago, Ilinois)

Rickety Rhyme - Poem by John Lyday

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rickety man, rickety house
quickly ran, saw a mouse

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Comments about Rickety Rhyme by John Lyday

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/29/2009 2:55:00 AM)

    mmmmmmmmmm
    this awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    like hickory dickory dock! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Mouse ran up the clock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    i loved your word play.. great indeed...

    with loves
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  • Rookie LOVEFOOL Aka (6/16/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    This is very good, excellent rhyme and a good story 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duh Huh (6/10/2009 3:18:00 AM)

    Very witty and funny John. It rhymes too lol. I wonder what inspired this one.
    Thank you for sharing. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie MuSiC HeaD (6/9/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    hehe this was a fun one.. although quite a sad story really, it sounded so upbeat! good one =) (Report) Reply








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