Riding Towards Destiny Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Riding Towards Destiny

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Sounds of an Indian drummer taking me away on a galloping
horse into tomorrow's sunset, filling my mind with wonder-
ful pictures of light and joy.

Riding quickly towards destiny, at times resting, leaning
back in the saddle, mind wandering into thought patterns
designing themselves as I continue riding forward.

Finding satisfaction, soothing rhythms and picturesque
landscapes through imagination, watching carefully as I
write them into poems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 28 August 2016

Riding towards destiny is the final destination for every creature to attain peaceful delight. Marvellous and deep thought provoking. Thanks for sharing. Regards. +10.

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Tony Adah 28 August 2016

...wonderful picture of light and. Joy. Good rendition. A positive mind leads to productivity. Thank you RoseAnn for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 27 August 2016

Three things are happening at once in this poem: A tabla player is displaying his agility and speed; you are confidently writing poems in a state of inspiration; you're being carried by a virtual horse at top speed. Speed seems to be the core Image in the poem - but there's no danger, no risktaking - because musician, poet, day-dream horse are all masters of their craft and the speed is an metaphor of how quickly each can reach the depths and breadth of their chosen art. These are three blessed conditions.

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