daffodil tears

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..................RISE.......................


rise till you cease to feel
rise till you don't feel to cease
rise above your own thoughts
rise till you own your thoughts
rise above the myths of faith
rise above the whips of fate
rise when time does not stand by your side
rise till you side line the time.......
rise above the despondency,
rise above the complaints...
rise rise and rise till cynicism fails.....

Submitted: Tuesday, July 20, 2010

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  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/30/2010 8:50:00 AM)

    the rep. of [rise] all through/rounding off with three [rise] in the last line/kite up the poetic tone/lovely /keep writing (Report) Reply

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