Unwritten Soul


Rise From The Ashes


Sent to the earth In the open light
White soul delivered out from the dark
Guardian of a pure heart, run in innocent blood
Owned the spirit like a young phoenix learn to fly
Underneath the skin it binds, fears existence denied
But when the sun loose it's crown at the dark night
Mist of fear shadowing all visible roads
Suffering without heat to breathe cold

Consuming air from this atmosphere
Holding soul in frozen blood, away from frozen heart
Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living
Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames
The glory now fade away soon to disappear
All broken, burned by this cold fear just in one night
And released spirit moved out as despaired soot
Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude
Left the rest wait to collapse on the ground
Hopes estranged, decayed in the ashes

Purified soul levitates between the earth and the sky
Like a mass of white cotton, now it keeps growing
Filtering air to embrace all scattering black dust
The spirit particles, to not gone in black space
Emerge In anew constitution, an invisible union,
Unison for two, back as a whole one again
Sown by lightning, ties them together
In a mega black cloud above the ashes
A restoration of fearless,
Mission to save the life grace

A shiny drop, hit the ground
The purest ardor in the gem of soul
Return to the ashes as a brave dew
A spark was created, life ignited
Drizzle bring more, in every drip drop
Bring the heats, poured as the rain fall
Towering fires, Igniting sensation
Celebrating of new rising life
The return of the soul and spirit
For the heart lend the pulses again
Breathing confident
To raise the flamed wings again
Behind the limb
Like burning fires
Like a phoenix reclaim dreams
From lost life in earth and return again
After one more time delivered from dark
To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise
Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
..............................

Submitted: Monday, February 13, 2012
Edited: Thursday, August 23, 2012

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about the poem:
Is the same title of my collection of 'rise from the ashes' theme..
The idea was came when i imagined if the the our strength get purified like rain process and return into the ashes...and each droplet (soul+spirit) be like a fuel to re ignite the ashes/ember and make them in fire again to rise as like phoenix, bird of fire...to fight all dreams and obstacle, coz...we once was born in fearless child but we lose it when we learn and face life threats..back to innocent sometimes can bring us something good...
The new theme will follow after this poem before it continue with other same theme soon! _Unwritten Soul

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  • * Sunprincess * (1/20/2013 8:33:00 AM)

    dear soul this is very imaginative and maybe
    this could be the truth of what happens in life.
    this poem is unforgettable! (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (11/18/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    This is meaningful. Innocent lost in maturity. The more mature the more we are anxious.

    I like your powerful similes and the language of the poem suits the message. Well done Soul (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (5/17/2012 7:19:00 AM)

    Philosophical poem.Your explanation is so lucid that the theme becomes crystal clear.Nice write! (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (3/14/2012 11:35:00 AM)

    A soul stirring poem with Zeal and Zest with spirit and soul I hear the cry of your soul yet there hope in this poem of yours. I love reading the poem like child who by-hearts tables.... These line caught my breath and fancy.....
    Taking over sanity to absorb all energy of living
    Numb all the strength till wings lost the last flames

    An Amazing poem by the SOUL so I give her, I favorite flowers - a daisy! A cripes, you may write many like this (Report) Reply

  • Whisperkwane Lamb (3/6/2012 10:25:00 AM)

    Meaning: yours: Like a phoenix reclaim dreams
    From lost life in earth and return again
    After one more time delivered from dark
    To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise
    Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
    Like the world in the begining from nothing to something as love grows it shows...you have touched my soul again...let it never end...a burst of fire...purifies one into believeing how great a darkness can be...turnnel vision sees more from a hearts pionts of view, as did you sayFrom lost life in earth and return again a new begining how wonderful is God's creation (you) woman for a man's spirit to be set a fire...you have good taste as a writer, please continue to please the heart and minds of many...thank you... (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (2/25/2012 7:29:00 AM)

    ''Sent to the earth In the open light
    White soul delivered out from the dark''

    yes! white soul delivered from the dark--from the unknown or from the innocent.......this is a very good saying, i like it very much, an excellent poem.pls read my new poem. (Report) Reply

  • (De Va) (2/22/2012 3:49:00 PM)

    to be shown your vision is wonderful....I see my own soul sailing in the midst of darkness, I find my travels are not alone, as I emerge from the ashes time and time again...blessings (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (2/22/2012 10:53:00 AM)

    Amazing. It really captures you, Soul. Now I see and understand clearly. Truly beautiful my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Nadood Al Nasser (2/22/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    very heart felt, i love it, it might be the first poem that i purely love for its meaning, and intention................. that was amazing (Report) Reply

  • Willie Walker (2/20/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    Force the soul to vapor above the ashes crude..
    Purified soul levitates between earth an sky.
    A mega black cloud above the ashes.
    A spark was created, life ignited.

    All the lines were marvelous, but you are excellent at creating images. Read and reread this and found it fascinating. You are special and it shows in your visions. Write on. It's only right...I will print this to read to my kin. willie (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (2/18/2012 4:03:00 PM)

    From lost life in earth and return again
    After one more time delivered from dark
    To seek the open light brighter than the sun rise
    Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
    Wonderful thoughts, amazing imagery and feelings you spared for us, thank you!
    I do feel sometimes that everything might happen for a reason and I struggle to learn the lesson, wonder often if this may be what life is about..learning and as you said understanding is the base for peace and calm I do hope I have my calm but I am yet to find my peace..Wonderful write, touched me deep, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Willie Walker (2/17/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    Life is hard when it attacks and abuses a sensitive soul. We struggle and end up bloody, but unbowed. I enjoyed this. Seems we have walked some similar paths brother..rate it high for feeling and ability to write it. (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (2/17/2012 9:44:00 AM)

    The great cry for one to rise even from the burning ashes and come forward to face the life challenges with love and devotion.Beautiful poem full of wisdom and courage! Deeply philosophical. I simply love souls poem. Must give 10+ (Report) Reply

  • John Carse (2/16/2012 11:41:00 AM)

    For the heart lend the pulses again. I loved this line. Your poems are epoch and quite absorbing. Thanks for your kind comment on my poem 'Till Friday'. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (2/15/2012 2:43:00 AM)

    To raise the flamed wings again
    Behind the limb
    Like burning fires
    Like a phoenix reclaim dreams
    From lost life in earth and return again
    After one more time delivered from dark
    To seek the open light brighter than the sunrise
    Cause after all what we found a lesson to be wise
    ****************
    Rise From The Ashes/rise from the sadness.......
    It's life and we need to live in here amdist all the pain and sadness........
    But those who can stretch their wings in these smouldering embers of life's vivdness, can soar like phoenix, again, forgetting their sadness was just like ashes...
    And this will be the lesson that we learn after each ascension......
    No one knows where from we came, , , ,
    But the sky with full of hope and a deep sea with trenches of hoplessness are awaiting us in each second of our breath....
    Can we consider sadness as it were just like ashes?
    Can we imagine that we've wings just like a butterfly, to buzz and to enjoy the different colours and taste of this vale....
    It's an amazing poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Top marks! ! ! ! !
    Soul,
    Your loving brother... (Report) Reply

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (2/14/2012 8:02:00 AM)

    To seek the open light brighter
    than the sun rise.
    Cause after all what we found a
    lesson to be wise...

    Yes Soul, through all our hardships we gather experience and wisdom.we learn from our mistakes and the pain makes us stronger, there's no need to think of a life with no challanges coz a man gets strong by standing against the wind..even though that strife need not be against other men...great poem my friend...
    Your friend.

    Siya. (Report) Reply

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