Rising Waters Poem by jodi glass

Rising Waters



sauntering along when suddenly she started to
drown in fear,
struggling with tides and caught unaware
and breathing, in short supply
being dragged down wards
her world, became scary again

tears mingling with scratchy guilt
and an itching skin that wont calm down
waterfalls rippling over a tensed up body
wishing she was sauntering along again


waves of relief short lived
when it happens all over again
the walls crumble slowly down
the progress made temporarily gone

and the confidence ran away the spoon

Tuesday, July 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fears
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my story of a 40 minute panic attack, i just hope i did it justice! will try a happy one soon promise. just need to find the time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 07 July 2015

a lovely well-thought poem. i like it very much.

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