River A-Flow Poem by Eric Elliott

River A-Flow

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I wish to know
the worlds
energy flow

So I follow
the rivers and streams
they come from lakes, ponds, and ground a-hollow
there I learned what it means

To be the start of something

So i traveled to many a place
running by waters edge I'd trip over my own two legs
with local children I race
They gave me food and warm bed

So in the morning I led

To where the rivers end
and the great flow begins

the basin opens to the lake
where the river ends the water grinds stone
washing away all in its wake

I was here I came to know, the world was whole
full of the energy that flows in me
So I grew ever bold
the world a locked door, energy was the key

of course I speek metaphorically.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2010

I wish to know the worlds energy flow So I follow the rivers and streams they come from lakes, ponds, and ground a-hollow there I learned what it means To be the start of something...........................YOU HAVE TO FOLLOW THE ORIGINAL SOURCE AND THERE U MAY COME ACROSS THE SOURCE OF ENERGY.... LOVELY POEM. I LIKED IT.....10 READ MINE..... GLOBAL WARMING, , , , WHY DO WE LOVE NATURE...

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Amber Roser 04 October 2009

'there i learnt what it means to be the start of something' Brilliant! Another one of those moments of poetic genius that litter your work! !

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