Robust Life Poem by Vidi Writes

Robust Life

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She is born
Not with silver spoon
She gives us a life of Gold.

She is brought up
Not in a state of aristocracy
She gives us a life of nobility.

She is educated
Not being pampered
She gives us a life of astuteness.

She is honored
Not being humiliated
She gives us a life of transparency.

She is left happy-go-lucky
Not being left loose
She gives us a life of blend.

She is bound with commitment
Not being fickle
She gives us a life of accountability.

She is very compassionate
Not being boorish
She gives us a life of passion.

She is certainly living hot-and-sweet
Not being in heaven-like
She gives us a life of reality.

She is our daughter
Not being treated as a weight
She gives us a life of ‘Robust’.

This poem is dedicated to my dear daughter - HAVYA on her 18th Birthday on 24/04/2009.

-vidi-
23/04/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 24 April 2009

What a lovely poem for your daughters birthday, she will be so pleased, a wonderful tribute, Lynda xx 10

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Vinod Kumar 25 April 2009

Really a wonderful and lovely blessing, Mothers are always like that, only mother can understand each and everything of our needs forever, Thanks for the poem and congratulate the success motherhood.10++

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Rani Turton 25 April 2009

Havya, at 18, life lies ahead of you and may a lot of beauty come your way. Vidi is a gifted poet and obviously a proud, loving and realistic mother. Both of you are fortunate in that, all the very best to you both.

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Hp Sindhu 25 April 2009

aunty has always been innovative :) n dis poem is awesum! ! because its from a true mother's heart :) i am sure havya is very happy wit dis..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 April 2009

unequalled trubute to a wonderful daughter as birthday `s fabulous gift -a ratrest of rares, from a superb poet(mother) that awes blazing her glories of uniqueness, yet it dazzles, a soulful grace, a divine feeling, a great feeling of satisfaction to be reckoned with, ingenious write that flows eloquently yet passionate,10++++++, thanks for sharing, soory being late dear Vidi to respond

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C.R. Clark 10 June 2009

What a wonderful write, Vidi. This poem expresses, not only, love for a child (we all love our children) but also a great respect and appreciation for the wonderful, strong, and exceptional individual that she is. Great write. My best wishes to you and to Havya. Richard

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Dr Kamran Haider 28 April 2009

Wonderful and very true... Daughters are really blessings... I have a 2 n half year old daughter and I can't tell you how much she makes me happy, content and proud... Wish you and Havya a lot of happiness always... Regards, Kamran

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Subroto Chatterjee 26 April 2009

Beautiful...! Good Vidi, good Havya, God bless. A belated Happy Birthday to Havya. But its your robustness which gave you robust Havya...! Cheers. Subroto

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Indira Renganathan 26 April 2009

A loving mother and a lucky daughter....congratulations to Vidi...best wishes to Havya(what does the name mean?) ...A lovely poem indeed

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 April 2009

Happy birthday to her..............a 'robust gem'

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