Romance Point [2] Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

Romance Point [2]

Rating: 5.0


ROMANCE POINT [2]
esspeecee. …11.10.08.

Lending from
Setting sun,
The red-
To color your feet. …. [1]

Staring at stars
For luxe lux,
To illuminate
Your feet…..[2]

Asking the sky
To drip
Gentle dew drops,
To sodden-
Your feet.... [3]

Whispering to flower
To air the fragrance,
To en-fragrant-
Your feet.... [4]

Put ankle bangle
To hear,
Tinkling euphony-
Of your fugitive feet.... [5]

Oh,
Sparkling diamond,
As ring
Decorate,
Your tapering toes
I want to.... [6]

Lay down
My heart,
To be in synchrony
With your wavy stepping.... [7]

Will:
Dab my quivering ‘lip-marks’,
Utmostly embrace,
Bosom in the aroma,
Of your:
Intolerably soft feet
‘tis my-
Romance Point.... [8]

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katang Chakravorty 26 November 2009

Fiancée’s every part of body is lovable and romantic…here poet highlighting feet Uncommon in real life but common in to Poets' imagination...

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Just after reading Romance Point 3 I find poet here has given Feet-Value’ than ‘Face Value’. Oozing beautifying of the feet. ‘Feet-Profile’ has over ruled the ‘Smile-Profile’. Ten++++

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Photode Photode 23 October 2009

Like runnel of Romance flowing thru’ poet’s mind. Excellent piece of work Sir. Ten +++ lay at feet of Romance. PO PO

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Joseph Poewhit 27 July 2009

Just like the steps of romance

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 June 2009

Exquisitely drafted ideas galore.......

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