Romantic Torment Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Romantic Torment

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essence and colors of twilight
ceased my heart,
yet still I have looped
on your thinking, my darling
snowflakes have covered the trees
underneath cold wind blows from north

My spirit become low,
what a teach of the nature!
darkest horizon what it has meant,
that threats my nights and days-

stars have blended, apart from hopes
clouds are whirling on drifted edge,
dreams have broken,
run with autumnal cloud
I can rather want to you,
my darling

As alluring attention that dies,
with illusion and hallucination

The last -
ever and forever,
my confession

I will die with a claim
of romantic torment,
‘O' darling and you will face,
the rude reality at the end -

- Shaleheen,28th Sept,2013

Saturday, September 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
romantic torment: my Confession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2013

vivid imagery, well composed poem and after all confession is the heavenly thing we must confess thank

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Patricia Grantham 05 November 2013

Reminds me of a book that was called True Confessions. Just telling of ones problems and concerns can clear the mind and heart of clutter. Clean up everything so life can go on. Good.

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Musfiq us shaleheen

Musfiq us shaleheen

Khulna, Bangladesh
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