Milica Franchi De Luri

Rose - Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

The red rose
you plucked
just for me,
is now immortalized
standing fresh, in
my still life painting
in a vase,
smothered with oils
and admiration
on my canvas
fresh forever
in a frame
on the wall.

Comments about Rose by Milica Franchi De Luri

  • Rookie - 166 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/7/2010 11:17:00 AM)

    what's fresh [arrested].........a paradox? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Alaude Solus (3/16/2010 8:31:00 AM)

    As the rose stays fresh, the poem also stays fresh.
    ^-^ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun (11/23/2009 6:25:00 PM)

    Two genres of art become one in this beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading 'A Rose', and I appreciate your kind comment you left for me as well :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shona Sengupta (11/4/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    sensational and a nice expression of thought! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Ramin Chaman (10/14/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    A nice portrait of paint by red rose....well said...Milica...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,134 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/10/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    how beautifully you have coined yor thoughts! shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Winchester (10/3/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    I can see the rose through your eyes.
    A Poets eyes as ever I saw some.
    The vision transferred into words.
    To place their beauty for comparison.

    Who said that romance was now dead.
    It`s Alive for I see it writ sweetly.
    I thank you again for your simple praise.
    Have a great day because your deserving. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (9/28/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, good work. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,519 Points Marieta Maglas (9/26/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    A wonderful narrative poem.The message is very clear that only the human talent can describe, through the arts the beauty hidden by The Lord in His creation.Lovely to read...........10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,078 Points Paul Butters (9/19/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    Immortalised! Great poem. Px (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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