Fay Slimm

Rookie - 33 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Round The Lighthouse - Poem by Fay Slimm

There she stood
................... personified naked strength.
Mighty white finger
........................
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Comments about Round The Lighthouse by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (11/13/2009 7:18:00 AM)

    It always fascinates me - the triggers that trip the creative inspiration - and what a powerful trigger your lighthouse proves to be in this fine poem, evoking as it does such a powerful emotional and dramatic response. Your work has great authority, Fay and the images you convey with style and originality (like the 'mighty white finger') demand a second reading. Mystery pervades the piece and a sense of grace and humility too. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 550 Points Ernestine Northover (11/2/2009 12:51:00 PM)

    Lighthouses light ones inspirations, they say so much in so many ways. Strength, power, solitude, regal, stalwart, silent and calm. Lovely poem that speaks of a lonely life in the middle of the forces of nature.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (10/30/2009 2:14:00 PM)

    Fay never lets down.. this poem stood righteous to the way of FAY (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (10/30/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    She stands alone, all painted white,
    a warning for ships that pass at night
    with slender shape, in jeweled height
    in darkest hours, burns so bright (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,567 Points David Harris (10/30/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    Fay, there is an allure with lighthouses because of their isolation. I sometimes think I would like to live in one, but on second thoughts I like the company of people. at time. A wonderful pictorial picture you have drawn here. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us.
    Hugs David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (10/30/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    it's beautiful fay, reminds me of the lizzard lighthouse i went in beautiful cornwall :) here is 10 Andy x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (10/30/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    fay a mysyerious but familiar place sounds like a lovely write 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (10/30/2009 6:59:00 AM)

    'The trip round the lighthouse
    ........................................ ended instead
    In light mist,
    ..................... but I knew I must go again
    And discover more
    ................................of this secret terrain..'
    A mesmerising trip you experienced, Fay, and expressed it poetically with such a wonderful imagery to invade a reader. Thanks for sharing with us.
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Fay Slimm (10/30/2009 6:25:00 AM)

    Thanks Richard J.... so glad you found something of value in this piece.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,344 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/30/2009 4:24:00 AM)

    Woooooooosh! Such meticulous & pictorial detail, lass....one of your finest(imo) ...Excellent Work, Ms. Fay from the U.K, so says FjR from the U.S.A.!

    F j R
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  • Rookie Daniel Kempson (10/30/2009 3:59:00 AM)

    This is an extremely good poem and good subject matter lovely in construction as usual 10 Daniel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (10/30/2009 3:54:00 AM)

    Loved this piece Fay, I have always found lighthouses to be things of beauty, as is your poem,10 from Tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich2 (10/30/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    Well, I am always glad to stop at your place, never disappointed.
    Interesting style as well, reminds me of a DG with ruffles.
    Hxxx (Report) Reply










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