Roundabouts Poem by Dan Brown

Roundabouts



I see you sometimes,

in the grip of a stranger -

careering through life, 

dancing beneath his fingers, 

and each time, I freeze -

a rabbit in your headlights.

You’ve gotten done up -

some new shoes and gaudy bling

and the dents I left

all pushed out and smoothed over.

I do wonder, though,

if all the problems beneath

- the whines and the groans, 

the niggles and the grating -

have really been fixed

or if you’ll break down and stall.

Like you did with me.

In the turning of a wheel

we come full circle

- you down your road, me down mine -
passing wordlessly;
we’re closer than you know, in
a roundabout kind of way.

Thursday, May 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Love this poem! Think it's absolutely brilliant and adding to my favorites list!

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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