Rubaiyat- Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat- Life

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I feel I am waiting like oranges
watching others going through crush machine
Just left with skin no juicy life
are we not following the same pattern!

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 09 November 2015

A great insight and a wonderful metaphor on the sad truth of the human condition. A very good write!

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Sanjukta Nag 08 November 2015

This a wonderful simile. Loved the concept.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Feeling the walking in path of life is fantastic in fun giving poem. Amazing theme shared really.10

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Loke Kok Yee 07 November 2015

poets are different, we are full of life! thanks Asim-10

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