Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,781 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Running Wolf - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In my dream
I dream I am you
running wolf
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Comments about Running Wolf by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 9,951 Points Daniel Brick (3/20/2015 1:41:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem! It runs with power and truth, it expands the heart to embrace both that power and that
    truth. It's with humility that I acknowledge you are writing about my American society, or more precisely the indigenous part of it which is Indian, and not white. I have a great belief in the life of the land, that the ground we stand on or run over, is alive, and feeds us with its energy. You have given voice to this belief. And it may just be the redeeming force that will save us from the bleak reality you reveal in your other poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 675 Points Ma Xiaokang (3/5/2015 8:11:00 PM)

    Because my light and soul
    I am the reincarnation of you

    nice one! thanks for sharing . learn from you! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,151 Points Kim Barney (1/15/2015 8:38:00 PM)

    This is very nice poem, Dave, but I have to agree with what Leslie Philibert said. You should capitalize the proper nouns Running Wolf and Indians.
    Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,743 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 12:39:00 PM)

    A Beautiful poem. You have penned it very well. Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us.
    Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathryn Mahan (2/23/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Very nice. I've felt it too. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 514 Points Stephen W (2/22/2014 2:12:00 PM)

    Good stuff. I think I almost understand it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Jayne Davies (2/22/2014 10:47:00 AM)

    Well done Dave! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,767 Points Smoky Hoss (2/22/2014 9:59:00 AM)

    Very good Dave; it makes my mind run wild... just as it should! Peace. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,270 Points Lyn Paul (2/22/2014 8:57:00 AM)

    Certainly beautiful words expressed. Thank you and congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (2/22/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    Like this, I would capitalise the name Running Wolf, as a proper noun, Indians (not indians) too.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/2/2013 3:30:00 PM)

    There is some tryth to this. All of us run wolf at some time in our lives. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,009 Points Savita Tyagi (2/23/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with a feeling of oneness with others, the essence of spirituality. It has been brought out so beautifully associating with wolf in this poem.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (2/22/2013 9:52:00 PM)

    What a good write. I like it. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (2/22/2013 6:34:00 PM)

    Hello Dave, I really love this poem. The wolf is an animal that provokes fear but has an instinct
    for survival. well penned. Appreciated! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Saranyan Saranyan (2/22/2013 10:23:00 AM)

    Great poem! Like the way it ended... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (2/22/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    A beautifully graceful spiritual piece. I'm part Canadian Indian and the older I get the more in touch with my spirit free side I let myself be. It's a wonderfully refreshing outlook on life. No restrictions just following ones natural instinct. Loved this piece and bravo on poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (3/17/2012 4:36:00 AM)

    Great poetry dave, nice perspective to see the world through the eyes of the wolf. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/25/2012 4:45:00 AM)

    Very good poem. Thanks Dave. I request you to read my poem and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Toft (2/23/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    Well done, good history lesson. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Sankaran Ayya (2/23/2012 3:48:00 AM)

    Dear Friend Walker you are running like a wolf in your dream and finally
    delivered the beautiful message -because my light and soul, I am the
    reincarnation of you..that is delighting. You are giving scope to devilish
    heart for transformation. Have I understood your Running Wolf Walker
    Your poem of the day filled the heart and soul.
    -KAVIN CHARALAN (Report) Reply










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