Rush Poem by Sonya Florentino

Rush

Rating: 4.8


I'm walking around with words in my head
I can't wait to sit so I can write them instead
I'm walking around with words that must be read

I'm walking around with poems in my head
I can't wait to stop so I can read them instead
I'm walking around with poems that must be heard

I'm making my way to the road up ahead
I know I can't stop till I'm finally there
I'm walking around with dreams I need to share

I'm walking around with love in my heart
I can't wait to stop so I can pour it all out
I'm walking around overhwhelmed and burning

I'm walking around with songs in my head
.....I'm running...............I'm running..........
.........................as...........fast......as...I.can...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This could almost be a song.. I like the beat i created in my head while i was reading it. You wrote this well ~Krista~

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Izik Alcox 12 December 2008

I like this one, it has great rhythmic flow at the beginning but starts to lose it however the message holds it together nicely, good write

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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