Ruthie With The Sagging Drawers .... [inspired Poetry; Humour/Humor; Short; Tantalizing! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Ruthie With The Sagging Drawers .... [inspired Poetry; Humour/Humor; Short; Tantalizing! ]

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Down the street she swung her luscious hips,
which caused me, an onlooker, to wet my two lips.
It looked like she was going to drop her drawers,
which would have caused, I'm sure, many roars...
of approval from the construction workers up high,
and yet she just glanced at them and let out a SIGHHH......
of satisfaction.

Saturday, October 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sexuality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my good friend (on PH) Ruth Walters said PH always adds a 'p' to 'drop' to make it 'dropp'. SO i 'had to' test the truth of the statement. maybe it only happens to English members?

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2015

After many months I am reading a poem of yours and as usual, couldn't check my laughter. Thanks for the notes at the end. 'SIGHHH......of satisfaction' - what was the satisfaction for?

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Kelly Kurt 24 October 2015

They seem to capitalize the t after an apostrophe. I want a poem about that. : -)

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