Sacred Trust Poem by monica monet

Sacred Trust

Rating: 5.0


Heat of criticism
vanishes
as mirror accuses

Arrogance once defrocked
reveals nakedness
as one muses

Blinding pride not grasping
how misplaced ego
abuses

Sacred trust a stewardship
kindness put
to proper uses

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 30 December 2009

but the poetic art or skill was good on ur part---i will give u a 10 as i give every1 w/o any business and yes seeing my face in front of the mirror

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 December 2009

Some stewardships are not blessed by God.We only adore people by watching tvs or the one who has reached some zenith.Nobody adores Adolf Hitler coz Germany lost WW2.Nobody sees his leadership skills and world-class abilities.And more so he reached becoming FUHRER for REICH from a country Austria-not Germany.I dunno if Australia will announce someone's name apart from a nationality crisis.Same goes with Britain or America.....it will only force people to become arrogant and countries will blame that man is naked to blame the personality.Mirror never accused GEORGE W.BUSH' grandparent who actually funded Hitler to start the war machine....its all people's bad business-mirror never accuses a tiger when he sees himself while drinking water that he killed so many deers and other not harmful animals--its game of power

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