Sad Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

this is short and sweet..

Nice short piece. However it feels like there is much more to this poem that could be expanded as it leaves me wanting more.

Rythmic and very rich in content. If we can accept our own sadness, sadness is not necessary a real bad thing.

Romantic!

Your poem is very nice. I felt your sadness. You can convey the feeling well.

Nicely written, it is short but you decribe sadness so well. I like the picture you paint here.10+

'Burst into tears Cry for no reason Stare at space Sad very soon... ' Sadness can be defined and manifests in many ways. Your poem accurately depicts how sadness can suddenly dominate our feelings, cause awkward changes in our emotions, with the pain of missing a special person in our lives. I enjoyed the honesty and direct simplicity of this persona. Read with pleasure.