Linda Ori

Rookie - 47 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

Sad Green Eyes - Poem by Linda Ori

You look at me with sad green eyes,
I'm overcome with feeling-
Such deep emotion they disguise,
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Comments about Sad Green Eyes by Linda Ori

  • Rookie Barry Van Allen (3/21/2007 12:12:00 PM)

    Linda,
    That was nice.
    Just sittin' here smilin ' !
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  • Rookie Not a member No 4 (2/16/2007 12:29:00 PM)

    A perfectly crafted poem, where the completely unforced rhyming structure increases the poignancy of the situation. Simply superb. xx jim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (1/9/2007 8:36:00 PM)

    A beautiful write, Linda... sad but at the same time endearing and warm. Well done! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charles M Moore (2/12/2006 7:03:00 PM)

    I agree with daniel tyler, very good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Tyler (12/24/2005 10:57:00 AM)

    I notice how your lines flow beautifully into one another. This has clever rhyming that isn't merely there for rhymes sake. There is a clarity of emotion that I much appreaciate. Well done.
    Daniel Tyer (Report) Reply








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