maria goodison

Freshman - 569 Points (06,10,1983 / perth scotland)

Sadness Fills The Room - Poem by maria goodison

She sits as the sadness fill the room,
unable to stop the tears that haunt her so.
She stays still and hopes
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Topic(s) of this poem: loss

Poet's Notes about The Poem

sometime it is just like this

Comments about Sadness Fills The Room by maria goodison

  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (7/26/2015 5:40:00 AM)

    Unable to stop the tears! With the muse of love and pain. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (3/26/2014 12:53:00 PM)

    Open the window, so the sadness will find way out and fresh emotion need to come in, if you let it be_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (3/24/2014 12:26:00 PM)

    agreed with Coleen,
    although sad but it written beautifully
    the emotions so alive
    and yes, this is an outstanding one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (3/15/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    Sad and heartbreaking yet written so beautifully. Having a daughter myself it brings a tear to my eye.
    Such a wonderful job on this. Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

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