Salvation Poem by ramesh rai

Salvation

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Since begining of civilization
so many great person came
showed the path of salvation
but still it is a question

Lord Buddha asked to follow
middle path to attain salvation
but nothing for innocent and deprived
without whom society is incomplete

Salvation has still become dream
and appears not to be secular

It is my firm faith
poetry will bring all
under the roof of salvation
enlighten their soul
make them able to share
pains and pleasure together
will make the society perfect
will make them to realise
pains and pleasure of every creature
the root of all salvation and
to establish love, peace, prosperity.

Tuesday, November 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 November 2014

poetry will bring all under the roof of salvation Wonderful solution observed. Poets must present eternity to all for attaining salvation.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 November 2014

Point to be noted- a nice message by poet- Since begining of civilization so many great person came showed the path of salvation but still it is a question as a whole a nice poem worth reading and learning thank you

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 November 2014

Point to be noted- a nice message by poet- Since begining of civilization so many great person came showed the path of salvation but still it is a question as a whole a nice poem worth reading and learning thank you

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