Same Idea Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Same Idea

Rating: 4.5


Suddenly I saw light passed near by
It was bright flash and I tried
To look and assess the reason
It was impossible for me as person

Was it real signal or danger?
I had little shiver in spine
It also caused unknown fear
First time I felt for life and tears rolled

Was this real life we intended?
Tried almost impossible and attended
For all luxury and fame in journey
Of course with blessings from almighty

Somewhere down I lane I developed
Some kind of feeling and stopped
It was just flash in mind
That I was lone traveler on land

That forced me to think
And made with force to sink
Yes, what was then the real aim?
I felt for it to claim

I thought for while and dreamed
About holy place and land
Where soul was to travel later on
The same idea occurred to me and gone

Friday, March 28, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

Suddenly I saw light passed near by It was bright flash and I tried

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2014

Yes, having traversed this boarder I will say the poem is so real and true the creation is so deep 28 Mar by leafsailors Ghost to same idea

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

Shujat Ahmad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

good Scarlett Humphreys4 minutes ago I like it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 March 2014

deep thinking Chris Thomas5 minutes ago dream on

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Gajanan Mishra 28 March 2014

This body is a holy place sir.

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