Sandman. Poem by J.A McManus

Sandman.

Rating: 5.0


You can’t ever imprison me
Through closed eyes you won’t ever see
I lurk within your mind’s despair
Whilst you sleep soundly on your chair.

I don’t live in the pits of hell
Within your dreams is where I dwell
Preying upon your every fear
Stripping you bare of joy and cheer.

I sing to you as smooth as silk
My voice as rich as mother’s milk
Singing sickly sweet lullabies
Filling your head up with my lies.

So try to slumber if you dare
Just know that I’m forever there
Waiting to feast upon your screams
Within the darkness of your dreams.

I love to hear the midnight chimes
As I commit my fiendish crimes
Shout my name out loud if you can
But most folk call me the sandman.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow! I've never thought of the sandman as evil, but I absolutely how you've portrayed him! Your poem flows so well and it is beautifully rhymed! The 2nd and 4th stanzas are my favorites! Those lines in particular remind me of a nightmare. I just-I love it! I can't wait to add it to my favorites! Truly wonderful job!

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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