Satan Was Waiting... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Satan Was Waiting...



Satan was waiting
Gleefully on the rails
At the end of the tunnel face
Unaware the driver stopped the train
Abruptly pulled the brakes
For want of Master’s
Signal green…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 14 October 2009

nirdai lakh chahe to kya hota hai, hota wohi hai jo manjure khuda hota hai. now Kesav, i dont know whether i quote correctly, but that's what i infer from your poem- metaphorical, wonderful vivid imagery to drive your point home. 10 Mamta

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Sonya Florentino 14 October 2009

a good driver is one who follows his good instincts.....

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 15 October 2009

yes..... but sometimes decisions are to be made by ourselves.... deep poem. loved it. thank you.

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premji premji 15 October 2009

keshavji, at the end of every tunnel, there is light...... the green light of nature... let her win... you do that through this poem...............

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 15 October 2009

meaningful poem to ponder upon................

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009

Fortunately, there was no accident, I suppose at the end of the tunnel.

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Alf Hutchison 29 October 2009

I enjoy thought prevocing poems... good write Kesav Regards Alf

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Ency Bearis 28 October 2009

beware - beware - beware - that's what this verses means.....10

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 October 2009

Great accident averted. Refined expression.10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 20 October 2009

excellent! or SOBRESALIENTE!

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