Satanic Seduce Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Satanic Seduce

Rating: 5.0


shiny eyes
rosy smiles
warm touches
familiar talking

suavely kisses
nicely big hugs
sweet meetings
tender whispers

fooled
manipulated
rejected
died

how many days
you need to
torture me
my loving passion?

how many weeks
you need to
crash me
my caring emotion?

how many months
you need to
damage me
my adorable desire?

how many years
you need to
poison me
my gorgeous instinct?

or is it you
flying satan
who already rob
my innocence heart?

or is it you
rounding satan
who already mock
my introvert soul?

or is it you
laughing satan
who already seduce
my ordinary mind?

(inspired by Hannah Foster’s The Coquette and Hector Berlioz’ Symphonie fantastique)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean Irvine 26 August 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! powerful....like it much keep it up

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Sebastine Humaemo 20 December 2008

pleasant to read...good one...sebastine....

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Reshma Ramesh 15 December 2008

well penned..............................

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Carol Rhodes 27 August 2008

AHMAD, RYTHMIC AND EMOTIONAL AND A GOOD READ. YOUR POEM CAUSED MY EMOTIONS TO REACT WITHOUT THOUGHT. THANK YOU. CAROL

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Fahim Sayed 27 August 2008

Easy to ready, nice crafted....good work sir.....keep writing... Fahim

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Tanya Stanford 27 August 2008

Your style is different to most and I really love that. It truly does make for easy reading. Once again, enjoyed this one. Love the way you start off with the good and end with the evil. Brilliant work

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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