Save Me A Good Seat Poem by Amanda Lukas

Save Me A Good Seat

Rating: 5.0


I know you're ready to go,
your bags have been packed for years.
I've watched you, twiddling your thumbs,
anxiously awaiting departure.
It's been a long trip, hasn't it?
I hope you got the chance to see all the sights.

Each day spent here has been trying for you,
and I can see that you are homesick
when I look into your eyes.
Sometimes you think you've outstayed your welcome, don't you?

It's hard for me to watch you
while you beg your legs to walk.
And I catch you once-in-a-while,
tears running down your cheeks.
I hate to see you helpless.
You were our rock for so long,
now all but gone.

Have a happy flight, my rock,
my stone, my hero.
We don't want to keep you from home any longer.
I'll see you when I get there,
but for now, save me a good seat?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 24 November 2007

'anxiously awaiting departure' Elegantly put. For anyone who has sat with someone through hospice, your words refelct the peaceful acceptance. I tried to address the struggle some have with this in 'Looking for Encouragement In ICU.' Tom

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Andre Yates 22 June 2007

You are amazing person... Through all your poems I can tell you have a good heart! This is really touching poem...

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Marilyn Lott 18 June 2007

Kind of sad. A lot more to the story for sure! But, you put it very well. Marilyn

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Francesca Johnson 18 June 2007

Amanda, this is a brilliant read, thought-provoking, poignant, deep. Top marks. Love, Fran xx

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Amanda Lukas

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