Treasure Island

Matthew Marti


Saved


I was confused, dazed, and lost. It was a nightmare, I had regrets, it was my curse!
I was saved by going to church and I said Hallelujah with the audience, it was loud like thunder and lighting!
I was tempted by all of the junk food back then, so I couldn't even control myself, so I saved myself the trouble by going to the gym and exercise, it felt like I was strong as the Hulk!
Ever since I have been exercising, I lost some weight, it felt great like eating healthier and controlling my diet!
Now I am safe as rabbit, so I feel saved!

Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2009
Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2009
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