Saying Those Words Poem by ben siemsen

Saying Those Words



saying those words
i love u kill me so bad
which means that i have
no other way of being able
get those words back
out from in side of me
which is going to be
the hardest thing possible
for these people
who are waiting
for me to say a word
which is going unwell

saying those words are harmless
to many who just think that
hurting other people is
so precious and wonder why
what they have done to
get rejected from
someone they love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rhiannon Scase 31 March 2008

Your best (and most truthful) so far, Rhiannon*

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 March 2008

This is not only good advice, It is well stated and to the point with nothing wasted. Very nice job. GW62 I invite you to read 'Waste Love'.

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