Scar Left Poem by Twisted Strange

Scar Left



the skin swells
the veins rush
the wound red
just as blush

the scab covers
yet a bruise around
the jitters there
the chills found

the scar left
a memoire designed
i'm supposed to hate the result
but instead i love what I've left behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 04 January 2013

Accurate presentation to what so many feel. The poem moves so fast, taking it's thoughtful pause with the longer lines at the end.

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Alexia Mae Brock 15 August 2012

nice poem. Stay Strong :)

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Iron Panda 23™ 06 April 2010

i likes this

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