hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,810 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

School - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Why I am being pushed to school?
For refining self and not looking fool,
To stay away from home and look cool,
Or to learn the system how to pass stool,

May be all they are right,
So I don’t stay home and fight,
Always disappear from their sight,
Break precious things as sign of might,

Mom always tense and furious,
Still keen to know and more curious,
Never look so hard and vicious,
Always aware and more conscious,

I struggle hard to know myth,
Why I am pushed to keep clean teeth,
Mom looks kind but always dictates,
Funny stories and incidences narrate,

In school I find another character,
Gorgeous and good looking teacher,
Kind but Stick in hand and terror feature,
After all I am told he will shape the future,

But difficult to learn why I stay so wild?
Entry in school makes me mild,
Enough big rooms and run in field,
Make me feel necessacity to build,

First lesson in school to lead life double,
More to learn and make me able,
Why I am so naughty in home and notorious?
School calms me down and feels so curious,

Whatever be the reason sounds so well,
Never have I thought it is another hell?
So much to see and so much to tell,
Try to raise more and suddenly fell,

Mom always says I am beacon and future,
Offers her sweets and sincerely nurture,
Love and harsh but symbol of mixture,
All lovely words of advice to make me mature,




Leading a life with distinction dubious,
Reason not known but seems so obvious,
They may have the experience previous,
May be world wants not to make me pious,

Make me feel at home but not at home,
Run aimlessly and in streets I roam,
Funny with the friends and always demand,
Things come ready and no one remand,

I learnt to live with ease and calm,
Teacher may say rise but not as palm,
Be as tree heavy and laden,
Stature high with approach Bolden


Comments about School by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Darshna Chopra (10/10/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    Why I am being pushed to school?
    For refining self and not looking fool,
    To stay away from home and look cool,
    Or to learn the system how to pass stool, (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Indani Narayan (10/9/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    Mom always tense and furious,
    Still keen to know and more curious (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jigisha Vyas (10/8/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    May be all they are right,
    So I don’t stay home and fight,
    Always disappear from their sight (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maulin Shah (10/7/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    Why I am being pushed to school?
    For refining self and not looking fool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Punjabi (9/22/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    So I don’t stay home and fight,
    Always disappear from their sight,
    Break precious things as sign of might, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poonam Suthar (9/22/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    May be all they are right,
    So I don’t stay home and fight, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kashi Paul (9/22/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    To stay away from home and look cool,
    Or to learn the system how to pass stool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Umesh Lalvani (9/22/2009 7:28:00 AM)

    Why I am being pushed to school?
    For refining self and not looking fool,
    To stay away from home and look cool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pami Panchal (9/21/2009 9:39:00 PM)

    May be all they are right,
    So I don’t stay home and fight,
    Always disappear from their sight, ..............10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lalvani Rekha (9/20/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    To stay away from home and look cool,
    Or to learn the system how to pass stool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Severina Dsouza (9/20/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    Always disappear from their sight,
    Break precious things as sign of might, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nagesh Ratnavelu (9/20/2009 9:20:00 PM)

    May be all they are right,
    So I don’t stay home and fight,
    Always disappear from their sight, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunita Rao (9/20/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    Why I am being pushed to school?
    For refining self and not looking fool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkat Ramanna (9/20/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    I struggle hard to know myth,
    Why I am pushed to keep clean teeth, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darshna Chopra (9/20/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    To stay away from home and look cool,
    Or to learn the system how to pass stool, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shalini Sundararamalingam (9/14/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    nice poe, but do kids really think so mature? ? ? ? maybe! some kids these days are so mature and love going to school.. one of my cousin sister who is just in her 1st std loves going to school, and is always so eager to study... am really surprised to see kids like these... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Suresh Vakil (8/15/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    it is not at all liked by kids....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chaul Vania (8/14/2009 8:03:00 AM)

    it is resisted by kids....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kant Shri (8/12/2009 7:31:00 PM)

    they are hesitant initially....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rupa Shah (8/12/2009 7:09:00 PM)

    children donot from the strat...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 25, 2011


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