rakshit rajender

Rookie (1.9.1998 / hydreabad, india)

Sea - Poem by rakshit rajender

Sea's are good, Sea's are great
while going in a ship like a whale.
I love to go to see the sea
because of there freedom.

Sea's are very good with there
waves like fine moves.
But don't jump in the sea pool,
you will feel like a salty pool.

Some people pollute them
with cargo ships and all
and the sea becomes polluted
an call for help 'Please help'.

I was a captain of a ship
and had some sailers too.
I steer my ship myself,
a star like john mase feild.

written by M: Rakshit Rajender


Comments about Sea by rakshit rajender

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/21/2008 11:39:00 AM)

    I know what you are saying-I have a great love for the sea even though I don't swim in it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/21/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    I like the phrase 'the sea becomes polluted and calls for help 'Please help''. Dear poet, Rakshit Rajender, keep working. Poetry call us to fly higher, deeper. You have a talent. You have the wings. Fly and give us the best you have (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Manonton Dalan (9/21/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    i love the sea. very nice poem. thanks.md (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 25, 2008


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