(1.9.1998 / hydreabad, india)

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sea

Sea's are good, Sea's are great
while going in a ship like a whale.
I love to go to see the sea
because of there freedom.

Sea's are very good with there
waves like fine moves.
But don't jump in the sea pool,
you will feel like a salty pool.

Some people pollute them
with cargo ships and all
and the sea becomes polluted
an call for help 'Please help'.

I was a captain of a ship
and had some sailers too.
I steer my ship myself,
a star like john mase feild.

written by M: Rakshit Rajender

Submitted: Friday, April 25, 2008
Edited: Friday, April 25, 2008


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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/21/2008 11:39:00 AM)

    I know what you are saying-I have a great love for the sea even though I don't swim in it.

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  • Joseph S. Josephides (9/21/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    I like the phrase 'the sea becomes polluted and calls for help 'Please help''. Dear poet, Rakshit Rajender, keep working. Poetry call us to fly higher, deeper. You have a talent. You have the wings. Fly and give us the best you have

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  • Manonton Dalan (9/21/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    i love the sea. very nice poem. thanks.md

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