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Searching Those Intense Eyes

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Those were the intense eyes
That I frantically searched
Looking for the love they held for me,
And the yearning they showed for my touch.
But as I dived deeper into them
I could fathom what they held behind-
Never before seen longing
A love so divine
They were HER shrine.

How could I be so naïve
To be searching for a lie?
Every blink of your eye
Meant my failed try
To garner love for me.
What your eyes held behind
Was the love I came to see,
But it was for her
And not for me.

I may be with you
But will never be with you.
I know those eyes never lie
Hope has me looking up at the sky.

(19 October,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 19 October 2006

preets...thank god one can read the truth in the eyes and lol...between the lines! ! ! ...intense poem...great read...love...nalini

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Tranquil Ocean 19 October 2006

How can I tell her about you Girl...pls tell me what to do Ahhh....The triangle.Interesting! ! Love...TO

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Ashish R 19 October 2006

You poem speak your feelings well.Wonderful write as always. Ashish

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 October 2006

A love triangle in equals each angle! What a sad geometrical figure? Triangulation is a dilemma? Splendid! Preeti Dartar.

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Abigail Keller 22 October 2006

Brilliant poem Preets! Glad to see these new ones! ~Amber~

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Scott Austin 19 October 2006

This piece has the intensity of a heartfelt write. Your eyes can never lie; the truth is always seen through them. May peace and joy fill your heart and your eyes always be true. Scott

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 October 2006

hey preets... a very heartfelt poem this 1... very intense... nice write... love... Asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 October 2006

Why do these situations occur, the ones that win our Hearts, only to have our Heart tossed back, worn & torn? Tis destiny & chemistry....And as a rule, it all unfolds, (in the long run) in our favour.Solid piece Preeti'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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