Seasons Repeat Poem by Sana Olivia Hernandez

Seasons Repeat



Though the seasons come and go,
And I do still like the snow.
Our never ending spinning globe.
It gets old!
You know?

-SOH

Thursday, September 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After 15 times it gets to be too much repetition...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 24 September 2014

I like in the very center of this poem the one long line OUR NEVER ENDING SPINNING GLOBE. That's so strong with a sense of durability, of things fixed in place forever, But it's surrounded by things on a human scale. Irritation at yet another winter! boredom with routines that happen but don't change anything. But right there in the center of the poem you give voice to what is almost eternal in nature and it's splendid!

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