Secret Lies Poem by Abby Belmont

Secret Lies



When we were together
You hid your true feelings
When you said forever
You thought about her

The secrets you closed inside
Surfaced and I saw the lies
You denied it and the more you'd hide
One day they did spill out

The secrets you hold in your heart
Are made of daggers and thorns
When they get in your system it is torn apart
When your lied all bleed out

When you meant one thing then left
It showed the truth inside every lie
And now your being charged with theif
Stole my heart then destroyed it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lizzie O'neill 08 March 2012

Wow, This poem is truly wonderful, Really nice. I especially like the last two lines. Truly a beautiful write, Please take a look at a few of mine

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

THIS IS A MARVELLOUS PIECE OF ART …………………………………….. What a nice poem IT IS! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’

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