Secrets Of Bedrock. Poem by Fay Slimm

Secrets Of Bedrock.

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Striated solid bulk
...............................emitting power,
Your dark streaks dominate
................... lone rock statements.

Along this beach.
....................... slated layers tower
Into immovable shapes
..................................... which, lately
Washed, now glisten.
........Time-sliced, wet and exposed.

Your laminate shelves
....................have braced against all
Raw sea-moods.
......... Slivered now, in your knowing
You bed deeper,
...................... thus you will never fall.

'Tho your walls vibrate,
..................... your face stays, sagely
Evoking stone-solid form
................................ which is ageless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 22 September 2009

Complex, good flow of words

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Bob Gibson 10 September 2009

All trace of earth is washed away, the granite wall defends the bay anchored deep within the earth, tall in height and broad in girth cold as charity, strong as faith! the strongest man is but a waif rugged, jagged, honed by time, faceted, simply sublime

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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