See The Oasis Poem by David Darbyshire

See The Oasis

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Catch a falling star,
put a rainbow in your pocket.
See the oasis afar,
get there in your own rocket.

Zooming above the earth,
see all the death and birth.
Land in your wonderful paradise,
so good you want to do it twice.

Then again watch out
what you wish for,
they may all come true
then what ya gonna do?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Shepperson 28 September 2006

A great poem. Love the last line. Marilyn

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Tiyler Durden 28 September 2006

very good Dave, Very vivid and picturesque (Spelt wrong) Have a 10 from tiyler...

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