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'See You Soon'

you going taking something far away
still be close with memories of night and day
my days will miss your company and night your tone
each split second I'll miss feeling alone
those few, how will they go?
ah! cant say, didn't got yet days like ago
just a matter of few but look so many
i don't want you to go but don' t have choice any
days will pass with irritating loneliness
everything silent, nothing to cheer and smile of emptiness
night will go with sky and my second moon
still you in mind saying ' See You Soon'.

Submitted: Tuesday, May 03, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, May 03, 2011


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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/3/2011 10:04:00 AM)

    Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery.
    Fine poetics.
    A big...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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