hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,069 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Seek An Answer - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Play Poem Video

: "I want world to be free from agony"
The idealists and poets pray to almighty
With sole aim to feel real freedom and liberty
Where all people are happy and free from poverty

Nice thing to dream and ask for
But alas! Mighty people seek war
Annex more territories to their kingdom
Only to make slaves and curb the freedom

This had been the trend since centuries
This world might have faced miseries
Lots of blood shed and poverty
Still we have no end to our fancy

We talk of humanity and kindness
We seek real peace and happiness
How do we find it despite resistance?
Where poor fight for life and existence

Yes, the contentment is the only answer
This might have been realized by the fewer
Hardly few could have succeeded to put in practice
Rest all might have been failed with resolve or promises


Comments about Seek An Answer by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 30,840 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/2/2014 10:11:00 PM)

    contentment is the only answer, sir, it is true. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    An ideal


    Julie Hutchings-Ririe2 hours ago
    I like the subject matter because its very relevant to our world today and it really conveys the feeling of hopeful idealism in the way societies deal with problems. Nice structure.
    Comment +1
    - (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    escellent

    Larry Stallings2 hours ago
    may we spread the wisdom of the poet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    Comment +1
    -


    John Titor2 hours ago
    Idea is there, but is lacking in depth.
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 9:39:00 PM)

    Ok


    Zoey Yanush2 hours ago
    pretty good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,069 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 7:32:00 PM)

    : ”I want world to be free from agony”
    The idealists and poets pray to almighty (Report) Reply

Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 2, 2014



[Hata Bildir]