Seen Poem by Elena Sandu
Seen
Low sound of waves
thunderous cries.
Broken heart raised
Its whispers to shouts.
I watched one kiss
bouncing at the horizon
could never have
...I was alone...
Unconscious soul
and heartless mind
were swept away
With grains of sand.
To other worlds
Top of the hill
So far from here
with true love filled...
Walked in the rain
No clouds to clean
Lost human gain: The Pain!
For Pain shall be no other scene.
this sounds sad, which made my heart up-side-down from the bounce! nice work, Elena
Hmmm need a handkerchiefs? we all here to share and wipe your tears...or maybe just need a big towel hahaha joking! Elena, in this new poem you are making new shape of poetry that you rarely done and the result was awesome...feelings is there, emotion is bolder, idea even thicker....very nice...But hey Stop letting pain taking over you, just let strength be your bones and fight everything.....the rest just tease and leave them...keep strnger! _Unwritten Soul
One kiss from her mouth, a waft of wind from her hair or a life without it... I'll never have (City of Angels)
Beautiful and I believe it's reality. Good luck dear poet.
a bit of fuzziness adds to the charm of yer poem.... the silent scream, the hopes dashed on far off shores. loves ceaseless perpetuation....with the same nagging suffering...well presented ***
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 5:30:21 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A solitary walk along the strands can drive all pain away and when heart is filled with love, we feel we are in wondrous lands! ! A nice poem! Thanks Elena..... Where were you all these days? I missed you a lot!