Selecting Relaxation Techniques Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Selecting Relaxation Techniques

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A
lavender
scented
jacuzzi
rose
petals
floating
about
a
mimicry
of
nature's
lotus
but
in
the
bubbly
bubblebath
as
soft
gleams
of
moon
beams
seep
in
through
translucent
glass
Luxuriate
in
the
ephemeral
inhale
in
the
aromatic
incenses
of
oils
and
essential
oils
Bathe
in
breathtaking
joy
euphoric
Like
in
a
Turkish
Bath
wherein
to
indulge
yourself,
in
steamy
massage
complete
with
the
charm
of
the
exotic
All
artificial
tranquilizers.

A
delicious
languor
to
steal
over
in
the
languid
twilight
upon
the
meadow
watching
a
small
animated
spectrum
in
the
after-
glow
flitting
among
pretty
petals
the
gossamer-
winged
mayflies
and
dragonflies
Fluttering
among
delicate
filaments
in
the
dusky
eve
the
flimsy
butterflies
All
in
all,
nature's
balms.

But
better
still,
for
a
far
more
soothing
effect

that
of
serene
ambient
prayer
That
blissful
feeling
of
connection

with the divine, the
Omni-present One.
In peaceful meditation
in spiritual reflection
In humble prostration
and rosary bead
adoration
for the Omniscient's
glorification
With the potential of
calming any nervous
wrecks!
In ethereal bliss hoping
for eternal bliss
That therapeutic
sensation
of being under His All-
encompassing
ever-loving care and
compassion.
A supernaturally
soothing ecstasy
the most relaxing
delicasy
in the loftiest of
perception.

Selecting Relaxation Techniques
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 23 February 2014

Such a beautiful and absorbing piece of poetry! I loved reading it too! Zaynub, I must say, you're a jewel in the world of poets! Keep it up and high! :)

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Soulful Heart 24 February 2014

Hey thats fatastic......so unique in tantalising our curiosity to wait for yhe next therapy. Yet the final universal therapy of submitting urself to that supreme one....such bliss to find in ur words....great way of putting it..

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Valsa George 25 February 2014

Wonderful.... got the aroma and coolness of a 'bubbly bubble bath'! But the serenity and soothing ecstasy achieved by being in communion with that supreme power is no match to any other relaxation technique! ! Love the diction and the inimitable way, the truth is presented! ! Kudos!

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Tabasom Azadee 25 February 2014

very good your attention are to important thing

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Shahzia Batool 25 February 2014

Zaynub, stay grateful to Allah the Almighty Who blessed you with a fine hand you have shown here...A delicious languor to steal over in the languid twilight upon the meadow...imagistic!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

in the aromatic incenses of oils and essential oils Bathe in breathtaking joy......amusing expression. A beautiful poem is so nicely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 December 2017

A truly stunning meditation piece. A feast for the senses. And closing with meditating on Oneness is divine. Excellent write. Thoroughly enjoyed (and meditated on) every line. Thank you so much for the wonderful experience. A Perfect 10!

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

...........a soothing piece..............I can smell the lavender scent, and feel the rose petals......lovely write..........

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Bri Edwards 28 March 2014

hey S., i saw this poem mentioned in your comment to '20 little angels'. i wonder what artificial tranquilizers are. have you thought about opening a spa? ? ? sounds like you have some good ideas here. thanks for sharing. bri ;)

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Ibrar Siddiqi 11 March 2014

Quite good. Excellent.

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