Self Realization Poem by kalyan mech

Self Realization



Do
The sky knows
What is wide?
Do
The ocean knows
What is depth?
Do
The mount knows
What is height?
Do
The sun knows
What is bright?
Do
The ice knows
What is cool?
Do
The flame knows
What is hot?
Do
The wind ever tries
To blow itself.
Do
The lighting knows
How much is he fast?
Do
Eyes ever
Have their sight?
Do
Nose ever has
Smell its smell?
Do
Finger ever
Touchs itself?
Do
Any tooth tries
To bite itself?
Do
River knows
What is leisure!
Do
Gold and silver knows
What is treasure?
Do
Anyone tries to know
Himself
If he does, its his pleasure.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem wrote when i was in school.......
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 07 November 2013

Like the thoughts behind the poem, it just seems repetitious. Maybe combine some of it to make it's meaning clearer. 'Does the ocean know what depth is, or the mountain know the meaning of it's height.' Maybe something along those lines. Good thoughts, keep writing, the more you write the clearer your poetry will become. Like this one. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your comment on my poem: Life Came Dancing, I appreciate it very much. RoseAnn

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Marvin Brato 27 October 2013

Indeed...self-realization is the best pleasure we can ever experience!

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