Senility Poem by Indira Renganathan

Senility

Rating: 4.6


Most people fear death
While some embrace it
Those some board death
By their own way to quit

Another kind being senile
Invite and await death
Too frail and fragile
Diseased with no mirth

Senility itself is Hades
Who escorts us to death
Strangling lives to fade
Day by day, breath by breath

Friday, October 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 30 October 2016

Those of us who are senile have advantages: We can hide our own Easter eggs. We can read the same book over and over, never needing to buy a new one. And... I forget what the other advantages are. Congratulations on poem of the day!

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Paul Warren 30 October 2016

To loose one's mind is not a good prospect. I think death would come as a relief 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 October 2016

Death is part of us. Living on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2016

First of all congratulations madam for seeing your poem as the poem of the day. Senility itself is Hades. Death is mysterious but truth. Death may come at any moment. Day by day, breath by breath we have to remember this. Very thoughtful poem you have shared...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2016

Death chooses no one. The physical and mental infirmity of old age comes to all. It's the second childhood that makes the loved ones sometimes stressful... It teaches us to love our body, soul and spirit to be worthy before God come judgment day... Thanks..

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 30 October 2016

Those some board death By their own way to quit - it takes brave ones to do so! Thank you for sharing Mam.

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Tom Billsborough 30 October 2016

Apologies, I meant Indira. Loved Savita's comments.

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Tom Billsborough 30 October 2016

A very moving poem, Savita, written with great understanding. Great choice for poem of the day. Well done.

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Savita Tyagi 30 October 2016

Suffering of senile, old and sick is something beyond comprehension. It invokes a deep sadness with no solution in sight.. Congratulations and thank you for sharing the poem of such important topic.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 October 2016

Heartiest Congratulations on the Poet Of The Day as also on the genesis of the feelings about most intriguing topic and it's quest n acceptance.

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