Senryu 1 (Bicycling In Pairs) Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Senryu 1 (Bicycling In Pairs)

Rating: 4.5


bicycling in pairs
Mormons hold Bibles tightly
black ties in the wind

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Ray Schreiber 30 October 2009

Like it...good thumbnail image. Young Mormons, doing their service, travel in pairs here too. They don't ride bikes though, San Francisco's too hilly. One of my favorite scholar/adventurers, Sir Richard Burton, after translating Kama Sutra and Scheherazade, attempting to find the source of the Nile, and many other impressive things, made his way to the Americas in the 1800's to make an anthropological study of the life style and customs of the Mormons in Utah. Your haiku is a good study.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Nice piece with deep sense,10++

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