Senryu ~ 29 (With Love) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ 29 (With Love)

Rating: 4.9


roots down to the heart
love blossoming in full swing
happiness takes wing.

Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastian G 12 October 2020

Definitely happiness will take wings with love

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Swati Awasthi 07 October 2015

Sir soooooo cute and beutiful lines of this poem

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Thanks much Swatji....

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Brutry Brara 11 October 2020

Short and beautiful I really like that leading such poems in leaving it to the users to interpret in their own way something extraordinary..5

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Wes Vogler 15 January 2016

excellent although it is by definition a senryu This is your strength

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Kingsley Egbukole 11 November 2023

Love breeds happiness. Well written

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Anjandev Roy 27 October 2023

This is a wonderful piece.....thanks for sharing...

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Rob Lamberton 06 January 2023

Roots nourish love which brings happiness! Nice share!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 April 2022

MMMMMMesmerizingly Beautiful Flight after Happiness has taken wings. A Love-Gem, dear Dr. M. ASim Nehal Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 April 2022

roots down to the heart love blossoming in full swing happiness takes wing. Dr. M. Asim Nehal's Senryu number 29,5 Stars full Score and myriads more, dear Dr. Asim Sir

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