Senryu - 61 (Life In Wrong Lane) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 61 (Life In Wrong Lane)

Rating: 5.0


Sleeping without dreams
Beauty without brain, Life is
running in wrong lane

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 October 2015

Such a life will be miserable! I know it is fictional! Great Senryu Asim!

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Loke Kok Yee 27 October 2015

change lane! Change lane! Thanks Asim-10

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T Rajan Evol 28 October 2015

Of course life will run in wrong lane, Master of Haiku and Senryu, Asim, God bless u.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2015

Dream is much needed in life. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2015

Life running in wrong lane is painful. Having beauty of love is interesting done. Very well drafted....10

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Sanjukta Nag 27 October 2015

Yes, when hopes are shattered, life feels like this. Well written piece on life as usual.

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Ari Alsio 27 October 2015

Good, I am dumbfounded!

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